Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Example of Polished Essay One



          Moral Distortion In Riots
            American politics have been the enemy of the working man in North America due to unfair wages, and unfair working conditions. While the men of America have organized together to riot against the corporations behind the businesses that they work in, they all have different reasons and philosophies concerning the cause of each riot. Most men who worked for these companies rioted due to the fact that they must preserve their masculinity and fulfill their role as a male to provide food for their families. They are the ones who go out in the world and do the physical labor, and make money. However, while this may be the main reason, further throughout the start of the riots, it seems to stem off with a more complicated reason, which seems to be ethnocentrism and favor among those who are the same ethnicity. While their morals seems pure and simple such as feeding your family, it can root down to a distorted nature where it can reach to heights such as preserving masculinity and a patriarchal society and oppressing other groups to get what they want.
            Men in America’s history have been known to be masculine, strong and often go through physical labor in order to do their jobs. Women would be assigned domestic roles, such as house cleaning and tending to their husbands. This would make her children and the wife dependent on the man to go out into the world and provide for them, and to make money (Burn 26). If men were not able to accomplish their role to feed his family, they would be emasculated in the society they lived in. If a riot would be one of the reasons to provide for their families and preserve their masculinity, it would be one that would seem favorable. In a way, their morals would revolve around honor.
            In order to preserve their honor as men, they would have to create riots to get what they want. In most cases, it is to increase wages or to gain access to food. In “The Flour Riot” by J.T. Headley, the story portrays the lengths that men would go to in order to fight against businesses for their families. “The Flour Riot” portrays a massive outrage in New York during 1837 due to the shortage of food and plummeting economy. Soon, in the story, since flour was getting scarce, business owners decided to raise up the prices in order for the demand to increase. Their profit would skyrocket since people would be desperate to feed their families, however, the business owner’s plan backfired against them, resulting in an all-out riot (Headley). The main moral of the flour riots was mainly to provide. It can relate to masculinity since they decided to destroy the city, vandalize the business by ruining everything they could see in the bakery, and knocking down flour, which they had been desiring. Men have been seen as brutish, and creating destruction in order to create a strong, and intimidating image about them. While providing may have been their first cause, flaunting their anger may be a hidden secondary reason. Not only does the display of masculinity appear evident in the riots taken place in the Flour Riots, but they also occur in the draft riots between the Irish and African-American rioters. By slicing the African-American’s testicles, it robs them of their manhood, and makes the Irish have power over them, putting the spotlight on their masculinity.
            An identical situation occurred in “The Railroad Riots of 1877” written by J.T. Headley, however, while covering several other states added on to it. Men in states such as West Virginia, Pennsylvania and Maryland who were faced against corporations behind the railroad industry who wanted to increase profits, and in order to do so, they lowered the wages of the working class. Instead of relying on a moral economy, they decided to push these workers too far. A moral economy can relate to an economical system based on fairness, justice, honesty and goodness (Kelly 2014). As a similar result to “The Flour Riot” in New York City, the corporation’s plan to impoverish the poor in expense of their profit revolted against them, resulting in several riots. However, the people who were in charge of the railroad industry decided to hire new people who would work at even lower wages. They were called "scabs." Soonly after, the original employees started to attack the scabs, who are actually going through the same situation as them (Headley).
            The scabs and the original workers were divided by two main different ethnic groups, the Irish and the African-Americans. It indicates a division among the two groups, although they were aiming to feed their families. The split between these ethnic groups indicates a moral dysfunction which takes “providing” and changes the story by altering it to ethnocentrism. Ethnocentrism can be defined as the belief in the inherent superiority of one's own ethnic group or culture. It can also block any signs of empathy towards those who are not in their social or ethnic circle (Barger 2014). Ethnocentrism is apparent in the riots taken place in New York. According to a PBS documentary series, Irish workers had a violent feud with African-Americans, who worked for a significantly lesser amount than the Irish. African-Americans were lynched,hung, tortured and emasculated by fetishizing parts of their bodies. Some of the Irish mutilated the African-American’s testicles as a way to portray this (Burns 2014).
            Based on the passaged “The Flour Riot” and “The Railroad Riots of 1877,” the morals that is mutual between the men of these riots were providing for their families, and to make sure their children stay fed. However, their motives seemed to run further than being a caretaker with themes such as conversing their masculinity in order to be socially accepted, and ethnocentrism, where they hurt large amounts of men from a different race, because the workers felt entitled and more important than they were. These riots were justified to a certain extent where they focused on being responsible adults defying multi-billionaire corporations who were taking advantage of them. However, when there is unnecessary violence used to kill innocent people who have done nothing at all in order to fulfill their egos, it becomes a tainted practice which probably should not have happened. Society is built on people who feel that they should feel superior than another in order to feel fulfilled, and these riots are examples of this tragedy.



                                                                        Works Cited
Barger, Ken. "ETHNOCENTRISM." IUPUI, Barger: What Is Ethnocentrism? N.p., 31 July
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Burns, Ric. "Order and Disorder (1825–1865)." New York: A Documentary. PBS. 25 Sept. 2001.
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Burn, Shawn Meghan. "Women's Low Status and Power." Women across Cultures: A Global
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 Kelly, James. "Moral Economy." Multitext. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Oct. 2014.
            <http://multitext.ucc.ie/d/Moral_Economy>.


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